Monday, 12 December 2016

Ambassador Application

This is my ambassador application. I want to be an ambassador so then I can talk to visitors about what we are learning at Pt England school. I really think I will be good at the job because I am brave and can stay focused on what I need to do.
Jaylim ammbassador application from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Monday, 5 December 2016

Does water and oil mix?

We have been learning about how soap bubbles are made. This is the experiment I did. You could try it yourself at home.

Thursday, 17 November 2016

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

One hot Friday we had  athletics Day
Down at Pt England school. Everyone at pt England school participated  but still I am still the fastest man alive. No one in the whole world could come close to beating me because  I am the fastest man in the world.

First they had to set up all the equipment for all the events. Then when we finish everyone was sitting down in lines and then we got split up into our house colors blue red yellow green and yellow.

I choose the 100 meters because I am fast and I could even beat the flash that is why i choose the 100 meters.

My highlight of the day is playing with my friends and not doing any work  

Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Into the cave

Once a upon a time there was a little kid named Jordan and he went on a trip With his Mum and Dad. so then they got some food and bodies of l&p and water so they got out of the car and when they went to the toilets they saw a little hole  and they went to go check it out so they climbed down into the cave.

So they carried on walking and when they got out of the cave the ate all their food they found. On the other side of the cave Some  water was made out of chocolate, and the trees was made out of spice chich, and the grass was made out of chocolate and the stikes were made out of french fries so then we went to go pick up the other family and we made a little house.  Son_Doong_Cave_5.jpg

Monday, 17 October 2016

The little boat

Start Writing Here:  Once upon a time Jay lim and  Diner o wanted to go fishing. So then they asket their mums and dads and they said yes.  But there mums said  only if the mums and dads go so then we got our boat and went off to go fishing.

So when we got they to the pacific ocean the got  the fishing rods out of the van they set off and then we cast our rods and waited.  And then after two hours we cot three chili bins filled to the max with some snapper .

But then out of nowhere I pulled up a big hammerhead shark and when  I relded it in it broke a bit of the boat but luckily a big wave came and pushed us back to shyer.      

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Jaylim Narrate

Walt: write a narrative Walt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full  

One hot day Jaylim wanted to go on a trip. he wanted to go kayaking so then he asked his mum and dad if they could go and they said yes.

So then Jaylim Ran to his friend and asked them if they wanted to go and so they went into the van  when they got out of the van they put on there life jacket. And jumped into the boat and grabbed their pedals and started to pedal away but then there.

Was a big wave came and tipped over the boat but then we saw a rope and we use it to tiy it around a strike tied it to the a pole so they don't go down a waterfall and then they lived happily ever after.

Thursday, 1 September 2016

P.E.S Olympics

  1. Who cheated and why it was cheating. How I felt about the cheating.

On Tuesday morning room 9 we walked to the breeze paired up we had to go on our hands and then we had to try crawl well some people were in the wheelbarrow. It was so unfair because the wheelbarrow is much faster than our hands and when I lost I was  so upset. And why it was cheating is because the wheelbarrow was using technology  some of the people when they're hand got tired they started to lay down and gets dragged by their  partner.  And it was unfair because some of the people worked hard for this and some other people just try and cheat to get the gold medal Well author people were working for it.         

On Tuesday i came in class and i saw a wheelbarrow.I was thinking we were gonna have a race.Mr bax said put your Chromebooks on the table and we went out side and we went in the breeze there was crammer.

Tuesday, 26 July 2016

We are the Champions!

sadly the holidays are over but when I got out of the car the  bell rang so then i rushed  straight to class but no one  was there. the theme  for the term and i meson a assembly is we are the champions and i found out from Mr Jacobson and Mr baseness. Mr Jacobson was fake filming. Team 4 is learning about the things we are not supposed to know and it is called uncovered or called exposed. And in the movie it told us about the virus and drugs and all so advertising and lost  and lost of secrets. My highlight of the day was watching all of the movies and playing with my friend it was so fun.

Wednesday, 6 July 2016


WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
        WALT: write a recount.

When I walked  into class I saw something in the corner of my eyes then i looked at it and it was carrots and I  said to. Myself where are all the bunnies If  we have carrots there must be bunnies.

When we walked outside we got one board and one knife and a carrots when we got all of those things we had to start carving our carrot. It was so so fun one person has carved a carrot and made it like a real carrot person we all thought that it was someone orange    

My carrot had big eyes and a twelve pack and no arms but my newly looked like a nacelle and at the end we got to eat it
My highlight of the day was hanging out with my friends and eating the carrot

Wednesday, 29 June 2016

Paul Martin Visit

IMG_0508.jpgPaul Martin Visit!
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: Write a recount.

It was a cold rainy  Wednesday when when Paul Martin came to Pt England school. I was so Excited I got goosebumps.

When he came he showed us  to draw a character for our book.  First he showed us his book, Kory the kiwi he told us how long it took him to do his book which was 5 years. He also plays rugby and his position was Prop.

My favorite part is when he taught us how to draw a character. I liked it because I learned lots.

Wednesday, 15 June 2016

Yum Yum!

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
One morning  I walked into class and  saw a weird look on Mr Baxindine face.  Then I saw a box and  I wondered what was in there, maybe there was a toy or some money or even some chocolate.

My friend Devonian grabbed a bandanna and wrapped it around my face so I couldn't see.  It was  dark so then when he finished I got goosebumps and started to shake but then I got a cup and did not know what was in it.

The green slime  jelly was so delicious. It was like some  worms was wobbling down  my throat. But it tasted like lime  but it tasted so so good the best jelly I've ever taste I just wanted some more  

Friday, 27 May 2016

super hero writing

Image result for Aquaman
Aqua-man is the god of lightning and tornadoes and even a god of dragons . He is the son of Zeus  and is a brother of Thor he is so powerful.  The guy to try and bet. He took down the strongest evil villain in the entire universe  with his one hand so the leader of all evil was to scared to look at  Aqua man. he is the leader of all gods he will kill anyone to protect the mortals like super guy and buzz no one

Comic Strip: Overcoming fear

Wednesday, 18 May 2016

Superhero Descriptions writing

Super girl is just like superman she is so brave and careful. Always having a smile on his face but one day she was so angry she shot out her powers, Super strength, laser eyes. Wind power. She had really blonde here that makes the appointee blind and then burns them so the superman rushed in and stopped super girl.  

Monday, 4 April 2016

The Wild Night

On tuesday night me and my friends were walking to our tenit and when we went inside the tenit water starter to drop down our back it was so cold our feet was soaking wet inside. the tent so me and my friends made our beds and tried to fall asleep as we were we heard a zipping noise so we grabbed out our some weapons and got ready to attack.  

But then it was just Mr Somervell telling us to come to the library but some people didn't come to the library  they stayed in there tents and nothing happened to them and there was. wind blowing over tents and even blowing over trees and one tree land on a tents but my tent it survived and some other ones but i don't like my tent cause kladen keep on farting.

But Now A keeped on snoring so I slapped him with plow so I slapped his bum with a plate and the I did a eeg fart in Nowa and kadans face and the they used my deodorant.
And then we all tried to go back to sleep but some people keep on farting and one of them was Kadan tony Nowa And lepa and me.

It was an adventurous week but I can not wait until camp next year. I hope you enjoyed my  story. The end.

Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Detailed Problem

Many years ago there lived a old mother pig and three little pigs. They lived in a little grassy clearing in the middle of a dark forest. The three little pigs grew so big that their mother said to them, "You are too big to live here any longer. You must go and build houses for yourselves but be very careful that the big bad wolf does not eat you.”

On a hot summer's day  there was three little pigs  and a big bad wolf. The Three#  little pig set off and  went and got him some material for Their  house he   the first little pig got some straws and started to build his. House it only took him 2 day and the second little pig got. Him some sticks for his house he built his house it took a little bit effort but the third little Pig was just a bit of smarter he got some stone and started to build his house out of stone it newlay  took him  a whole year.

Wk 7: Capitalisation

Correct the capitalisation in each sentence as you rewrite it in colour below.

  1. ben and i are going to the movies.
Ben and I are going to the movies.

  1. yesterday, i went to pt england beach.
        Yesterday, I went to Pt england Beach.

  1. tuesday is the duffy assembly.
       Tuesday is the Duffy assembly

  1. have you seen the movie three wise cousins?
       Have you seen the movie three Wise cousins?#

  1. mr burt is the principal of our school.
       Mr Burt is the principal of our School.

  1. did you know that miss west likes to sing?
        Did you know that Miss West likes to sing.

  1. mrs moala was born in the united states of america.
        Mrs Moala was born in the united states of america.

  1. mr sommerville and miss lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.
        Mr Sommerville and Miss Lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.

Monday, 29 February 2016

crocodile attack

At  midnight jordan was so very  hungry but there was nothing to eat. So then he got his fishing rod ready and the boat ready and went to the lake.

when he pulled up a fish a 3 meter crocodile jumped up out of the water . And then the crocodile tried to bit a hole in his bot with his serape tee but Jordan stayed strong i scared the crocodile swimming back to it’s home but there was still a hole in the boat and Jordan Jordan just got back to land but there was still not that much to eat.

So he tried the pacific ocean he cote 10 snapper  15 kings for his 3 kids jaylim viliami and Devonian.  And the when his kids turn 10 Jordan said he well take his kids fishing so when they went fishing they all cort  1 snaper each and then after the they loved fishing the end

Friday, 5 February 2016

all about me

Hello My name is Jaylim and I am 9 years old and I am turning 10 this year. I am a student at Pt England school and my  two awesome  teacher's name are Mr  Baxendine and Mr Goodwin. I enjoy playing  soccer and rugby. My team for rugby  is called Titans and I also like  basketball. I hope you enjoy my story. Please leave a comment.

Thursday, 4 February 2016