Monday 3 September 2018

my poem

A friend is like a flower
A rose to be exact
The best of a friend
Will always have your back
They will stand up for you
No matter what happens
Even if they have to change their attitude

And that’s how much they matter

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4 comments:

  1. Leo4 September 2018 at 10:26

    Kia ora Jaylim, I really enjoyed reading your poem.I think it was really great!!!! I hope to see more from you.

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  2. Tupuia4 September 2018 at 10:31

    Kia Ora Jaylim, i liked your poem, it was great reading it hope to see more posts from you.

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  3. Lyi Sorn4 September 2018 at 10:38

    Kia Ora Jaylim, I enjoyed reading your poem, It is amazing, I want to see more poems what you have, WELL DONE, JAYILM, GREAT WORK, KEEP GOING

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  4. Petesa @ PES4 September 2018 at 15:51

    Aloha, Jaylim!

    Great to see you posting positive blog post on your blog! I really like your poem, it is very meaningful and understanding. I really like the part where you said "A friend is like a flower, a rose to be exact" I really think you have been putting alot of success into your poem. Keep on doing great work Jaylim!

    From Petesa!

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