Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Wk 7: Capitalisation

Correct the capitalisation in each sentence as you rewrite it in colour below.

  1. ben and i are going to the movies.
Ben and I are going to the movies.

  1. yesterday, i went to pt england beach.
        Yesterday, I went to Pt england Beach.


  1. tuesday is the duffy assembly.
       Tuesday is the Duffy assembly

  1. have you seen the movie three wise cousins?
       Have you seen the movie three Wise cousins?#

  1. mr burt is the principal of our school.
       Mr Burt is the principal of our School.


  1. did you know that miss west likes to sing?
        Did you know that Miss West likes to sing.


  1. mrs moala was born in the united states of america.
        Mrs Moala was born in the united states of america.

  1. mr sommerville and miss lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.
        Mr Sommerville and Miss Lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.


Monday, 29 February 2016

crocodile attack




At  midnight jordan was so very  hungry but there was nothing to eat. So then he got his fishing rod ready and the boat ready and went to the lake.




when he pulled up a fish a 3 meter crocodile jumped up out of the water . And then the crocodile tried to bit a hole in his bot with his serape tee but Jordan stayed strong i scared the crocodile swimming back to it’s home but there was still a hole in the boat and Jordan Jordan just got back to land but there was still not that much to eat.



So he tried the pacific ocean he cote 10 snapper  15 kings for his 3 kids jaylim viliami and Devonian.  And the when his kids turn 10 Jordan said he well take his kids fishing so when they went fishing they all cort  1 snaper each and then after the they loved fishing the end










Friday, 5 February 2016

all about me

Hello My name is Jaylim and I am 9 years old and I am turning 10 this year. I am a student at Pt England school and my  two awesome  teacher's name are Mr  Baxendine and Mr Goodwin. I enjoy playing  soccer and rugby. My team for rugby  is called Titans and I also like  basketball. I hope you enjoy my story. Please leave a comment.