Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

One hot Friday we had  athletics Day
Down at Pt England school. Everyone at pt England school participated  but still I am still the fastest man alive. No one in the whole world could come close to beating me because  I am the fastest man in the world.

First they had to set up all the equipment for all the events. Then when we finish everyone was sitting down in lines and then we got split up into our house colors blue red yellow green and yellow.

I choose the 100 meters because I am fast and I could even beat the flash that is why i choose the 100 meters.

My highlight of the day is playing with my friends and not doing any work  

Jaylim Narrate

Walt: write a narrative Walt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full  

One hot day Jaylim wanted to go on a trip. he wanted to go kayaking so then he asked his mum and dad if they could go and they said yes.

So then Jaylim Ran to his friend and asked them if they wanted to go and so they went into the van  when they got out of the van they put on there life jacket. And jumped into the boat and grabbed their pedals and started to pedal away but then there.

Was a big wave came and tipped over the boat but then we saw a rope and we use it to tiy it around a strike tied it to the a pole so they don't go down a waterfall and then they lived happily ever after.

Paul Martin Visit

Paul Martin Visit!

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

It was a cold rainy  Wednesday when when Paul Martin came to Pt England school. I was so Excited I got goosebumps.

When he came he showed us  to draw a character for our book.  First he showed us his book, Kory the kiwi he told us how long it took him to do his book which was 5 years. He also plays rugby and his position was Prop.

My favorite part is when he taught us how to draw a character. I liked it because I learned lots.

Writing: Make it Interesting